{"id":47,"date":"2015-09-30T21:45:00","date_gmt":"2015-09-30T21:45:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/lucilleossai.com\/Blog\/index.php\/2015\/09\/30\/how-to-craft-powerful-emails-that-get-you-noticed\/"},"modified":"2024-10-23T16:09:41","modified_gmt":"2024-10-23T15:09:41","slug":"how-to-craft-powerful-emails-that-get-you-noticed","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/lucilleossai.com\/blog\/2015\/09\/30\/how-to-craft-powerful-emails-that-get-you-noticed\/","title":{"rendered":"How To Craft Powerful Emails That Get You Noticed"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-large is-resized\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/4.bp.blogspot.com\/-rGx7V0l90zo\/Vgw0WD5EYLI\/AAAAAAAADAA\/ONduA2VOxdY\/s640\/Email%2Bicon%2Band%2Bapointing%2Barrows%2B-%2Bfreedigitalphotos.net%2BStuart%2BMiles.jpg?resize=590%2C442&amp;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" style=\"width:373px;height:auto\"\/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:43px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><strong><em>This article was updated in October 2024.&nbsp;<\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:18px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">Unless you\u2019re a celebrity like Oprah Winfrey, a business mogul like Richard Branson, or a universally recognised figure like Barack Obama, your unsolicited email will often be deleted.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">Worse yet, even when you have legitimate reasons for sending emails, such as seeking clarification for a project, requesting feedback from your boss, or following up on a lead, your emails are either not promptly acknowledged or ignored altogether.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">When you do get a response, it\u2019s frustratingly vague or fails to address the issue at hand. This scenario forces you to send additional emails, thus spinning the vicious cycle of email hide-and-seek.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">Then, if your role is steeped in marketing and sales, your stress is magnified. You know from experience how you agonise about crafting \u2018cold emails\u2019. You know the type \u2014 those <a href=\"https:\/\/www.gmass.co\/cold-email\" data-type=\"link\" data-id=\"https:\/\/www.gmass.co\/cold-email\">catchy, actionable emails<\/a> designed to coax engagement and generate sales from prospects you\u2019ve had no prior contact with.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">But before you write off that difficult or non-responsive recipient as the devil incarnate, understand that people are busy. They juggle deadlines, countless meetings, addiction to devices, and short breaks \u2014 often ineffectively. This means that emails deemed unimportant or irrelevant are shelved to be answered when the recipient has a spare moment, which never happens. So even with the best intentions, that email you vaguely labelled <em>\u2018Next phase<\/em>\u2019 won\u2019t be opened.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:36px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Why emails&nbsp;<em>really<\/em>&nbsp;matter&nbsp;<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:15px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">Before you conclude that emails are so pass\u00e9, the points below should convince you to take them seriously:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:34px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image is-resized\"><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/4.bp.blogspot.com\/-5XdHwFu4hqA\/Vgw64Kz975I\/AAAAAAAADAQ\/IepIz7ajgqo\/s1600\/Do%2Byou%2Bknow%2Bqueation%2Bin%2Bbubble%2B-%2Bfreedigitalphotos.net%2BStuart%2BMiles.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/4.bp.blogspot.com\/-5XdHwFu4hqA\/Vgw64Kz975I\/AAAAAAAADAQ\/IepIz7ajgqo\/s640\/Do%2Byou%2Bknow%2Bqueation%2Bin%2Bbubble%2B-%2Bfreedigitalphotos.net%2BStuart%2BMiles.jpg?resize=530%2C530&amp;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" style=\"width:370px;height:auto\"\/><\/a><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:43px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">1) Despite the popularity of social media, emails are still considered <a href=\"https:\/\/www.edisonmail.com\/blog\/study-across-generations-email-remains-a-critical-tool\" data-type=\"link\" data-id=\"https:\/\/www.edisonmail.com\/blog\/study-across-generations-email-remains-a-critical-tool\">a critical tool in daily life<\/a> across four generations: Baby Boomers (born 1940s\/1950s), Generation X (born 1960s\/1970s), Generation Y\/Millennials (born 1980s\/1990s), and Gen Z.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:13px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:14px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">2)&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.linkedin.com\/pulse\/20140824134433-52797148-5-reasons-why-email-is-still-a-great-b2b-marketing-tool?_mSplash=1\">Business-to-business email marketing<\/a>&nbsp;is considered a gold mine due to high conversion rates linked to email lists.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:13px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:17px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">3) Email responsiveness boosts trust in a brand, <a href=\"https:\/\/www.socialmediatoday.com\/news\/how-email-responsiveness-builds-trust-infographic\/572022\/\" data-type=\"link\" data-id=\"https:\/\/www.socialmediatoday.com\/news\/how-email-responsiveness-builds-trust-infographic\/572022\/\">impacts sales, and builds repeat business<\/a>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">Moreover, as a professional or executive, you\u2019ll be perceived as unreliable and untrustworthy if you don&#8217;t respond to emails promptly. Consider this faux pas from management&#8217;s viewpoint: Why should you be promoted to high responsibility when you can&#8217;t be counted upon to acknowledge issues and address them on time?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">Therefore, learning to write a winning email and respond appropriately will get you noticed and set you apart from the pack.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:37px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading has-text-align-justify\"><strong>Writing that elusive, compelling email<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:14px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">So, here&#8217;s the dilemma: presenting your thoughts to ensure a response is almost always guaranteed.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">I say <em>almost <\/em>because, despite your best efforts, some people who are not &#8217;email people&#8217; won\u2019t respond. In such cases, you\u2019ll need to find the preferred method for communicating with them, such as via telephone calls, face-to-face meetings, video-based communication tools, social media, etc.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">Drawing upon my experience writing numerous unsolicited emails (in situations where I had no prior contacts) and other emails to persuade or trigger actions from CEOs, diplomats, and organisations, I learnt one critical point about emails that yields results:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:35px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image is-resized\"><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/4.bp.blogspot.com\/-VgZUAYQa098\/VgxA5tLof9I\/AAAAAAAADAg\/AKKPyEJWahE\/s1600\/Value%2Bspelt%2Bon%2Bdice%2B-%2Bfreedigitalphotos.net%2BStuart%2BMiles.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/4.bp.blogspot.com\/-VgZUAYQa098\/VgxA5tLof9I\/AAAAAAAADAg\/AKKPyEJWahE\/s640\/Value%2Bspelt%2Bon%2Bdice%2B-%2Bfreedigitalphotos.net%2BStuart%2BMiles.jpg?resize=544%2C432&amp;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" style=\"aspect-ratio:1.258957654723127;width:382px;height:auto\"\/><\/a><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:45px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><strong>Highlight the value\/benefit you will bring to the recipient.&nbsp;<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:26px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">Whatever is contained in your email should make his\/her role easier (making him\/her look good), his\/her business more competitive\/profitable, or his\/her company&#8217;s brand more recognised. Only when you can address the allure of <em>value<\/em>, even from the subject line, will your email be opened.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Below are tips that will help you with the process.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:48px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>1) Write a catchy subject line<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:18px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>This is the most essential part of the email, but is often given little thought.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">Grab the recipient&#8217;s attention by writing a short, declarative phrase that gets straight to the point.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:31px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image is-resized\"><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/4.bp.blogspot.com\/-kF5AJSiIlHA\/VgxB_d9n7oI\/AAAAAAAADAo\/-R3gVZk4LTQ\/s1600\/Man%2Bin%2Bfront%2Bof%2Blaptop%2Bwith%2Bquestions%2B-%2Bfreedigitalphotos.net%2BJscreationzs.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/4.bp.blogspot.com\/-kF5AJSiIlHA\/VgxB_d9n7oI\/AAAAAAAADAo\/-R3gVZk4LTQ\/s640\/Man%2Bin%2Bfront%2Bof%2Blaptop%2Bwith%2Bquestions%2B-%2Bfreedigitalphotos.net%2BJscreationzs.jpg?resize=555%2C416&amp;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" style=\"aspect-ratio:1.33278955954323;width:367px;height:auto\"\/><\/a><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:31px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>For unsolicited emails, options include:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:17px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">A) Most Admired Company X in Y Location Seeking Partnership in Z Venture<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:11px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>B) Boosting Recipient Company&#8217;s Profits Using X Initiative<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:9px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">C) Increasing Recipient Company&#8217;s Sales with Proven X Method<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:12px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>D) Addressing X Problem to Forestall Y Crisis<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:17px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">For other expected emails, the rule of thumb is to jog the recipient&#8217;s memory to prompt him\/her to respond quickly.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:0px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>Some examples:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:15px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">I) Approval Required for Project A Before B Deadline<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:12px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>II) Follow-up on C Issue for D Purpose<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:14px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">III) Recommendations for Quick Resolution of E Issue<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:16px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">Remember that the aim is to entice the recipient to click on the email because of its <em>relevance<\/em>. The straightforward subject line allows him\/her to &#8216;tune in&#8217; on the issue and eliminate ambiguity if he\/she handles similar matters.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:37px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>2) Construct the body of the email<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:56px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image is-resized\"><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/2.bp.blogspot.com\/-jkM1rlp2lW8\/VgxK1hS8R3I\/AAAAAAAADA4\/5MoTNfvS_H0\/s1600\/Businessman%2Bhighlighting%2Bpossibility%2B-%2Bfreedigitalphotos.net%2BSira%2BAnamwong.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/2.bp.blogspot.com\/-jkM1rlp2lW8\/VgxK1hS8R3I\/AAAAAAAADA4\/5MoTNfvS_H0\/s640\/Businessman%2Bhighlighting%2Bpossibility%2B-%2Bfreedigitalphotos.net%2BSira%2BAnamwong.jpg?resize=515%2C515&amp;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" style=\"width:367px;height:auto\"\/><\/a><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:27px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">The body of the email should comprise the following elements:&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:23px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><br><strong>A) The salutation\/greeting<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">You must ensure the correct spelling of the recipient\u2019s name and title.<em><br><\/em><br>\u201cDear Mr\/Mrs\/Dr X&#8221; <\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:6px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">&#8220;Head of Sales\/CEO, Y Company\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><br>Avoid using <em>&#8220;To Whom It May Concern&#8221; in your business emails when <\/em>you can find the name\/title of the recipient. The lazy phrase gives the impression that you couldn&#8217;t be bothered to do basic research and may ruffle some feathers. Don&#8217;t take that risk.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:19px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><strong>B) The heading<\/strong>&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">This section isn\u2019t always necessary. However, if it\u2019s required, use similar wording as the email subject and add a few extra words for clarity.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:25px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><br><strong>C) The opening line<\/strong>&nbsp;<br><br>Get to the point quickly:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:11px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">&#8220;<em>Last year, your company recorded X million USD in revenue. We can increase your sales by X% this year. By merging our company&#8217;s software Y with your existing tool&#8230;&#8221; <\/em>(For unsolicited emails where you\u2019re adding value).<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:13px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">&#8220;<em>Further to our discussion on X date about the proposed budget for Project Y&#8230;<\/em>&#8221; (For an email to jog memory).<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:11px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><br><strong>D) The call to action (CTA)<\/strong><br><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">The CTA is the action you want your recipient to take and essentially the purpose of sending the email. It could be a date for a meeting you&#8217;d like scheduled, some urgent documentation you need to be sent, some innovation you\u2019d want to be approved, or a complaint you wish to be handled.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Simply state your request politely:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:16px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">&#8220;<em>I\u2019d appreciate it if you could kindly schedule a meeting to discuss the X solutions we offer that will reduce your operational costs by Y%<\/em>&#8220;.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:16px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">&#8220;<em>To ensure the smooth delivery of Project X, please suggest which of the options mentioned above will be most effective<\/em>&#8220;.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:15px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">&#8220;<em>I&#8217;m appealing for your quick response to de-escalate the X issue\u201d.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:17px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><strong><br>E) The closing remarks<\/strong><br><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">End with a flourish, always adhering to standard business etiquette:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:17px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><em>&#8220;Whilst awaiting your response on this sensitive matter, we wish to thank you for your cooperation&#8221;.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:16px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><em>&#8220;Thank you for your time. I look forward to receiving feedback at your convenience&#8221;.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:19px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>Remember the parting words:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:15px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p><em>\u201cAll the best\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:6px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>\u201c<em>Best regards<\/em>\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:16px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p><em>&#8220;With (my) best regards&#8221;<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:19px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><em>&#8220;With revered regards&#8221; (for those V<\/em>IP recipients)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:14px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">&#8220;With a deep appreciation of your continued\/anticipated support&#8221;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:26px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">If you\u2019re wary of rocking the boat, then the standard will suffice:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:19px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">\u201c<em>Sincerely<\/em>\u201d<em> or <\/em>&#8220;<em>Yours sincerely&#8221; <\/em>(for &#8216;named&#8217; recipients, e.g., Professor X, Mrs Smith)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:19px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">&#8220;<em>Yours faithfully<\/em>&#8221; (for &#8216;unnamed&#8217; recipients, e.g. &#8220;The Director, Corporate Communications&#8221; or &#8220;The Dean, X Business School&#8221;)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:32px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Notes to remember<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:49px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image is-resized\"><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/2.bp.blogspot.com\/-csqBO6oB9DI\/VgxQUOS_ZsI\/AAAAAAAADBI\/pWfVEwKNyw8\/s1600\/Man%2Bholding%2Bup%2Bdon%2527t%2Bforget%2Bsign%2B-%2Bfreedigitalphotos.net%2BStuart%2BMiles.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/2.bp.blogspot.com\/-csqBO6oB9DI\/VgxQUOS_ZsI\/AAAAAAAADBI\/pWfVEwKNyw8\/s640\/Man%2Bholding%2Bup%2Bdon%2527t%2Bforget%2Bsign%2B-%2Bfreedigitalphotos.net%2BStuart%2BMiles.jpg?resize=492%2C423&amp;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" style=\"aspect-ratio:1.1646153846153846;width:376px;height:auto\"\/><\/a><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:32px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">Generally, your email should be short and at most four or five paragraphs, including the closing remarks.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">When addressing a complex issue, you may need to write longer emails. Nevertheless, your writing should be crispier, so aim for shorter sentences of 20 words.&nbsp; Use bullet points when communicating multiple ideas and strip away flowery language. Strong verbs such as &#8216;provided&#8217;, &#8216;analysed&#8217;, &#8216;sold&#8217;, &#8216;built&#8217;, &#8216;supervised&#8217;, and &#8216;led&#8217; effectively highlight important information.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">You should also prioritise the active voice as often as possible: &#8220;<em>We decided to discontinue the process<\/em>&#8221; versus &#8220;<em>A decision was made to discontinue the process<\/em>&#8220;.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><br>Above all:&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:6px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>I) Proofread thoroughly<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">&#8220;<em>Let&#8217;s eat, Grandma<\/em>&#8221; versus  &#8220;<em>Let&#8217;s eat Grandma<\/em>&#8220;.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The first option is an invitation extended to Grandma to share a meal. 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Use the tips provided and go craft that email!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\">What other tips have you used to write effective emails? Let me know by posting your comments below.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:30px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><strong>Don\u2019t rush off just yet. Please remember to:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><br>Help someone out. Kindly share it in your social networks by clicking on the icons below.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-justify\"><br>You should also&nbsp;sign up for updates in the blog\u2019s right sidebar so that you are&nbsp;immediately<strong>&nbsp;<\/strong>notified via email when a new blog post is published. 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